Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Jessica's draft writing

As the enormous roaring wave got closer to the creaking boat, Nathan realised that there was nothing he really could do. He walked slowly to the front of the white boat. He stared at the wave as it got closer. It seemed to be getting bigger. He thought of the other people on the gleaming boat that he would never see again in his life. He was sure he could he a roar of a lion just before he was thrown right off his shaking feet.
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1 comment:

  1. Pod 903 September, 2008

    jess that was so cool






































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    cool cool cool

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