Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Writing......

Today we did some editing inserting and replacing. Heres the one i made.

 Tim hurried towards the closed window . He was sure he heard a smallish noise . It had not frightened or scared him , but made him curious to if something was outside . He saw  tree on the far left swaying in the strong wind. He heard the noise , louder now , to the near right and quickly jerked his head to find its place. Thats when it happened the event that would change his life dramatically , Forever!


By Me a.k.a Hayley.  
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1 comment:

  1. Pod 903 September, 2008

    i really liked how you did that little "me a.k.a hayley" and i liked reading it i really thought that it was that amazingly cool.

    From ME CAITLIN your friend

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