Caitlin's edit pracitse

Tim shakly walked over to the huge window.He was sure he heard a bang of a nosie.It had not scared him but it made him think if something was outside.He saw a spooky tree to the left not caring about swaying in the wind.He heard the scary nosie again to the right and quickly turned his shaky head to see it's source. That's when it happened ,that very event that would spook his life forever and ever and ever.