Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Caitlin's last editing practise

As the biggest wave got closer to the tiny boat, Nathan realised that there was nothinghe could do at the last minute. He quietly tiptoed to the hull of the small boat. He saw the the lasing wave coming for them. It seemed to be getting bigger and bigger as  got closer . Nathan thought of the best people that he couldn't ever see again. He was positivly sure he could hear the amazing roar of the lion just before he was chucked off his feet.  

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