Wednesday, September 3, 2008
the chapter story
As the wave rushed closer to the boat, nathan realised that there was nothing he could do. He walked to the front of the boat. he watched the wave as it sped closer. It seemed to be getting even bigger as it rushed closer. He thought of the people that he would never see again. He was positive that he could hear the loud roar of a lion just before he was thrown of his feet. A sea monster!
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4 comments:
I think this is very good and interesting and fun to read
hi its Ethan here man it is quiet good and sort of good editing ill give it a 7/10
your is very fun to read and good editing in the story is good but maybe next time you could do some more editing and maybe next time you could make a little bit better
its quiet a good story and very intersting it'll be a 8/10
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