story on Tim

red is were I edited.

this is the story I edited...

                                                                                            

tim walked briskly over to the cold and frosty window. He was sure he heard a noise out side. It had not frighted him, but it made him wonder if something or someone was outside. He saw a tree lightly in the wind. He heard the again to [the] his right and quickly turned his head to find its source.thats when it happened the event that would change his life [forever] to the end.

by brodie